Wednesday, October 24, 2007

Shed, Asleep


A hundred years I stood
Sun and snow on my roof
Icicles dripping sharp
Snakes and ivy, grease and bolts
Planks and parts, bottles, tools
Once, a pony, whose old belly sagged
Almost to the grass tops
Taking shelter under my roof.
One by one the boards rotted
From the ground up
A scalloped edge starting
Where they no longer met the dirt.
Behind the dripline, a chipmunk highway
Powderpost beetles ticking a death watch.
Phoebes in and out; the furtive rustle of mice
Piling pignuts against a rainy day.
One day I lay down
Like a cow slowly, falling to my knees
Dropping the hindquarters last.
I lay against your trunk
You: sprung from a seed
Spat forty years ago
from a jaw long gone to dust.
May I rest here, lean on you
In the fine autumn rain?
Of course I may.
You're stuck here, too,
dropping apples small as a monkey’s fist
On my weary roof.
Wake up. Wake up. Wake up.

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15 Comments:

At 7:18 PM, Blogger Trixie said...

monkey fists....

I like the perspective. Thanks.

 
At 7:24 PM, Blogger Mary said...

You really have it, Julie. I can only shake my head in wonder at your poetic talent. This is worth reading more than once. Thank you!

 
At 8:08 PM, Blogger Karen said...

I don't know what else to say -- stunning, absolutely beautiful.

 
At 8:23 PM, Blogger Lisa at Greenbow said...

Love old barns
Even in their death
Valient warriors

 
At 9:19 PM, Blogger Sara said...

Brilliant ! Julie, you are so very gifted. Thank you.

 
At 9:32 PM, Blogger pineyflatwoodsgirl said...

YOur lovely poem reminds me of this Kate Wolff song:


The Lilac and the Apple
(Kate Wolf)

A Lilac bush and an Apple tree
Were standing in the woods,
Out on the hill above the town,
Where once a farmhouse stood.

In the winter the leaves are bare
And no one sees the signs
Of a house that stood and a garden that grew
And life in another time.

One Spring when the buds can bursting forth
And grass grew on the land,
The Lilac spoke to the Apple tree
As only a good friend can.

Do you think, said the Lilac, this might be the year
When someone will build here once more?
Here by the cellar, still open and deep,
There's room for new walls and a floor.

Oh, no, said the Apple, there are so few
Who come here on the mountain this way,
And when they do, they don't often see
Why we're growing here, so far away.

A long time ago we were planted by hands
That worked in the mines and the mills,
When the country was young and the people who came
Built their homes in the hills.

But now there are cities, the roads have come,
And no one lives here today.
And the only signs of the farms in the hills
Are the things not carried away.

Broken dishes, piles of boards,
A tin plate, an old leather shoe.
And an Apple tree still bending down,
And a Lilac where a garden once grew.

 
At 5:00 AM, Blogger Julie Zickefoose said...

Thank you, PFWG, for bringing a long-forgotten tune and lovely word-picture, made by a dearly missed artist, back into my head. Seeing the little shed collapsed against the apple tree moved me deeply, and I realize thanks to you that the apparent partnership they have is perfectly evoked in Kate's song. Did my subconscious mind sing that song while composing the poem? Probably, but it never floated up into my conscious brain. Thank you again.
Anyone who's missed PFWG's incredible photography (taken from a canoe) of Florida birds and animals, including otters!! needs to check out her wonderful blog. Should a large flashy woodpecker grant her a fly-by, she'll be ready.

 
At 7:11 AM, Blogger Rondeau Ric said...

Excellent Jule.

 
At 8:37 AM, Anonymous Karol said...

Julie, I read with wonder at your poem, but I never thought it was yours, should have known better. But there was no name at the top and I expected to see the ownership when I finished and still I wondered....could you have written these beautiful thoughts? And of course you could and have before. But there was so much detail, it seemed like an old timer must have written this. But I guess after all of these years keeping a watchful eye on your surroundings and all you see and share and your knowledge, I can call you "old timer."

 
At 8:43 AM, Blogger Julie Zickefoose said...

Honey, I fully qualify for old-timer status, and am looking forward to my senior discounts in the not-distant-enough future.But the minute anyone describes me as "spry" (as if vivacious weren't bad enough), they're gonna be hurting.
I'm glad you liked the poem, Karol.

 
At 9:05 AM, Blogger Mary said...

Julie,

I don't use my discounts unless the cashiers force me to use them... And it really fries me when they tack on the discount without even ASKING!

I think you have an old soul but a very young heart. You are not spry - you are kickin' !

 
At 3:08 PM, Anonymous Susie at GW said...

How you reach in and grab hold of something beautiful in all the things around us, even falling down sheds! I love your blog because you're so gifted; you see, you share and you weave it all into this amazing ongoing thread that lifts and blesses us all. Everyday I'm inspired by your knowledge, your dedication to finding beauty in small things, and most of all for sharing it with us! You rock Julie. Thanks!

 
At 4:06 PM, Blogger BT3 said...

this is your best poem ever, Zick.

 
At 7:37 AM, Blogger KGMom said...

I love the image of the shed lying down as a cow would. Brilliant evocative way to help us picture this slowly sagging shed.

 
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